Nato G Posted May 1, 2015 Share Posted May 1, 2015 It looks like you've kept the exact same list of effects and just gotten rid of the part of the profile that explicitly states he has a chemical for each one. Somehow, I don't think that's what Ultron meant. Quote Embers - A Bionicle Saga - Chapters/Review Class Is Out - A Farewell To Corpus Rahkshi - Chapters/Review BZPRPG Characters - Minnorak, Kain, T'harrak, Savis, Vazaria, Lash BZPRPG Mercenary Group - The Outsiders - Description - History - Base Ghosts Of Bara Magna - Ash Tribe - Precipere - Kehla, Somok, Skrall, Gayle, Avinus, Zha'ar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Khromatose Posted May 1, 2015 Share Posted May 1, 2015 (edited) It looks like you've kept the exact same list of effects and just gotten rid of the part of the profile that explicitly states he has a chemical for each one. Somehow, I don't think that's what Ultron meant....Yeah...I thought he meant that I could create potions with differing effects...but I'm still not sure. I mean, how would I use a potion if I didn't know what effect it will have on the enemy? Wait for Ultron to post what it does? And he doesn't have a chemical for each one necessarily anymore, he now has to make the potions on hand with whatever he may have. At this point, I might as well replace all his gear with gunpowder tools. Edited May 1, 2015 by ArcticFreeze17 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nato G Posted May 1, 2015 Share Posted May 1, 2015 This is what Ultron suggested: I would suggest cutting down on the variety of chemicals he has (come up with ones that can be used creatively for a variety of effects instead of having a specialised potion for any occurrence) and say that, rather than have them immediately to hand, he has to mix them up on the scene from what he has (something which cyclone powers would actually be helpful for) So you've only really done the second part: And he doesn't have a chemical for each one necessarily anymore, he now has to make the potions on hand with whatever he may have. Quote Embers - A Bionicle Saga - Chapters/Review Class Is Out - A Farewell To Corpus Rahkshi - Chapters/Review BZPRPG Characters - Minnorak, Kain, T'harrak, Savis, Vazaria, Lash BZPRPG Mercenary Group - The Outsiders - Description - History - Base Ghosts Of Bara Magna - Ash Tribe - Precipere - Kehla, Somok, Skrall, Gayle, Avinus, Zha'ar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Khromatose Posted May 1, 2015 Share Posted May 1, 2015 I would suggest cutting down on the variety of chemicals he has (come up with ones that can be used creatively for a variety of effects instead of having a specialised potion for any occurrence) and say that, rather than have them immediately to hand, he has to mix them up on the scene from what he has (something which cyclone powers would actually be helpful for I'm not sure how to accomplish the first half of the former, but the second half is easy. Remove the list and make the potion effects based on nature of potions. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyrd Bid Ful Araed Posted May 1, 2015 Author Share Posted May 1, 2015 Ultron, could Shock use the Launcher? The orbs would be filled with electrical energy, that on impact would release a burst of electricity about four feet in diameter, and would shock anything in the area. Also, Shock is bringing the launcher for Nightmare. Also, the library has seen better days...I'm assuming the electrical energy is coming from Shock himself and not a battery in the launcher or something. Yeah I'd allow that Name: Doubt Variation: Fragmentation Level: 2 Gender: Male Gear: Doubt carries a small watch hidden in the armour of his chest. It is attached to a chain no longer than a foot. He has a metal ball attached by a chain about a Bio in length. It is attached to his wrist. Appearance: Doubt runs at average Rahk height. He is brown with hints of translucent green. His eyes are also green. And his hands are big enough to fit around a Rahkshi head. Personality: Doubt is reasonably friendly, but he tends to bash things he doesn't like. He takes pride in his skill with his weapon. He hates refectory gruel, and will sometimes resort to eating wood or paper because of it. He loves Matoran as well, and has never gotten the chance to see one. He is oddly good at tinkering. Bio: Doubt comes from a Makuta who succeeds in minor experiments, one of them being a Bula-powered generator. His Makuta doesn't like Corpus, but was commanded by his superiors to send Doubt there. Doubt has won several battles against Rahks much quicker than himself, but has yet to prove himself an effective warrior. He also likes calm songs and especially is fascinated by sand. He also hates cats.Approved Name: HelixLevel: 2Type: CycloneGender: MaleGearHe carries lots and lots of glass orbs and vials in a pouch he has. With this and his any ingredients he has on hand. He can make chemicals with one or more effects. However, sometimes he'll throw random chemicals together to making an unstable These effects includeFreezingBurningExplodingCorrosionPoisonRustingSmokingHealingBoostingCuringHe wields two metal blades with a insulated rubbery leathery grips that he calls Lightning Rods. Why the grip and the name? Because the blades are electrified by an electric generator (converted from an electrolysis device) that is strapped to his arms like a vambrace.He also has a chemistry kit he had to create himself, consisting of glass beakers, granulated cylinders, test tubes, and flasks, a Bunsen burner, and other things. He also caries two syringe-knives that auto-injects upon puncturing through skin.Appearance: Unlike the black and white of a normal Cyclone Rahkshi, he is green and silver, with transparent lime plates and spine. He also permanently wears shades because science is cool. And explosive. And flashy. His spine protrudes in a way that looks like wings, but they are small and simply aesthetic. Also his electricity on his blade comes out as a light lavender for reasons unknown.Personality: He believes that science can solve most, if not all problems. And quite literally as he indulges in all knowledge related to science, engineering, smithing, and more. He prefers to stay away from his foes, using smoke, acid, and other vials to strike from afar. Bio: He has been in Corpus Rahkshi since the beginning, but simply secluded from the rest of the student body. He has preferred to gather a ton of knowledge rather then join any event, preferring to spend a third of his day reading any and every book in the library, and the second applying his knowledge in the gym by training or lab work, and the other third sneaking to the Cauldron to get supplies. He used to do stuff in private in the corner of the gym away from others, but as he collected things from the Cauldron, he began to convert his dorm into a lab. But now he has amassed enough knowledge. Now was the time for action...yet he isn't sure where to start yet. At this time he is currently researching explosives, getting closer to making gunpowder. Edits for the profile made in bold. You still make it sound like what he has in the vials can give him the same effects as an Ice Resistance, Fire Resistance, Fragmentation, Molecular Disruption, Poison, Quick Healing and (if you throw in the swords) Electricity Rahkshi could have, all on top of his actual Cyclone powers. I mean...really? You think having easy access to the powers of eight Rahkshi is not in any way OP?What I meant with my suggestion was something along the lines of him having to mix Solution A with Solution B, and because one is acid and the other alkali they create an exothermic reaction and there's your burning. Or you take Solution A and mix it with Powder C, use cyclone powers to mix it up a little, and the result is a lot of thick gas as they react and there's your smokescreen. But mixing Solution B with Powder C does nothing...until you chuck in a bit of Compound D where the result is a violent explosion. Something that requires a bit more effort and time to achieve than simply grabbing the vial with a big flame symbol on it whenever you want fire. I'm also going to question the equipment a little. How is he carrying it all is the first. Thats a lot of gear you've given him, and a lot of it is easily breakable so its not like you can just bung it all in a big sack. He's got a bunsen burner but not, I notice, an enormous gas canister to use as a fuel supply for it, so thats going to be useless. And also (though this may be my GCSE knowledge of chemistry letting me down) I don't think an electrolysis device works like that. Again, my knowledge might be faulty here, but I'm pretty sure they use up electricity to create effects like plating one metal onto another, they don't produce electricity. 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Nato G Posted May 1, 2015 Share Posted May 1, 2015 I just looked up electrolysis. From wikipedia: "In chemistry and manufacturing, electrolysis is a method of using a direct electric current (DC) to drive an otherwise non-spontaneous chemical reaction." Quote Embers - A Bionicle Saga - Chapters/Review Class Is Out - A Farewell To Corpus Rahkshi - Chapters/Review BZPRPG Characters - Minnorak, Kain, T'harrak, Savis, Vazaria, Lash BZPRPG Mercenary Group - The Outsiders - Description - History - Base Ghosts Of Bara Magna - Ash Tribe - Precipere - Kehla, Somok, Skrall, Gayle, Avinus, Zha'ar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Khromatose Posted May 1, 2015 Share Posted May 1, 2015 (edited) Uh....I actually changed the profile again when Locus had questioned the effects before you arrived. And I believe I mentioned that he keeps his lab gear in his lab/dorm. He would only carry a couple of specialized vials. Please no.It's nothing like Raptor. If that's what you're thinking. Helix is based on one of my Self MOCs who is named Helix Storm. I might make another a version of him in Tanks.EDIT: Changes in bold. But this is still not done. I want to draw him out to show how he actually looks like.Name: HelixLevel: 2Type: CycloneGender: MaleGearHe carries lots and lots of glass orbs and vials in a pouch he has. With this and his any ingredients he has on hand. He can make chemicals with one or more effects which depend on the properties of the liquid. (i.e. A frothy and cold liquid may create a bunch of foam which will freeze, and a sweet smelling fluid probably means apple cider.) However, sometimes he'll throw random chemicals together to making an unstable potion. Unstable potions explode.He wields two metal blades with a insulated rubbery leathery grips that he calls Lightning Rods. Why the grip and the name? Because the blades are electrified by an electric generator (converted from an electrolysis device) that is strapped to his arms like a vambrace.Powder Bombs - A bomb made out of gunpowder and a small clay pot with a string. This will be made after his gunpowder discovery. He will carry 5 of these bombs.He also has a chemistry kit he had to create himself, consisting of glass beakers, granulated cylinders, test tubes, and flasks, a Bunsen burner, and other things. This he keeps in his dorm.He also caries two syringe-knives that auto-injects upon puncturing through skin.Appearance: Unlike the black and white of a normal Cyclone Rahkshi, he is green and silver, with transparent lime plates and spine. He also permanently wears shades because science is cool. And explosive. And flashy. His spine protrudes in a way that looks like wings, but they are small and simply aesthetic. Also his electricity on his blade comes out as a light lavender for reasons unknown.Personality: He believes that science can solve most, if not all problems. And quite literally as he indulges in all knowledge related to science, engineering, smithing, and more. He prefers to stay away from his foes, using smoke, acid, and other vials to strike from afar. Bio: He has been in Corpus Rahkshi since the beginning, but simply secluded from the rest of the student body. He has preferred to gather a ton of knowledge rather then join any event, preferring to spend a third of his day reading any and every book in the library, and the second applying his knowledge in the gym by training or lab work, and the other third sneaking to the Cauldron to get supplies. He used to do stuff in private in the corner of the gym away from others, but as he collected things from the Cauldron, he began to convert his dorm into a lab. But now he has amassed enough knowledge. Now was the time for action...yet he isn't sure where to start yet. At this time he is currently researching explosives, getting closer to making gunpowder. Edited May 1, 2015 by ArcticFreeze17 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyrd Bid Ful Araed Posted May 1, 2015 Author Share Posted May 1, 2015 Uh....I actually changed the profile again when Locus had questioned the effects before you arrived. And I believe I mentioned that he keeps his lab gear in his lab/dorm. He would only carry a couple of specialized vials.Version I quoted and commented on was from this post (see the little arrow in the top right of the quote box? Click it and it'll take you to the post thats been quoted), which is the last one I saw. You said in that post you had made edits, and since quoting the profile would have been pointless otherwise I assumed that version of the profile had the edits. Is there a more updated version? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Khromatose Posted May 1, 2015 Share Posted May 1, 2015 (edited) Uh....I actually changed the profile again when Locus had questioned the effects before you arrived. And I believe I mentioned that he keeps his lab gear in his lab/dorm. He would only carry a couple of specialized vials. Version I quoted and commented on was from this post (see the little arrow in the top right of the quote box? Click it and it'll take you to the post thats been quoted), which is the last one I saw. You said in that post you had made edits, and since quoting the profile would have been pointless otherwise I assumed that version of the profile had the edits. Is there a more updated version?Yeah, sorry. I went to bed before I could tell you. Just look at the post you quoted where I just added the bio now.BTW, the apple cider is a joke. But he'll often make a berry soda, though. Edited May 1, 2015 by ArcticFreeze17 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nato G Posted May 1, 2015 Share Posted May 1, 2015 Okay, I've got a question now: where is Helix finding all of this stuff? He's got gunpowder and dozens of different chemicals - he has to be sourcing them from somewhere, and last time I checked, Corpus Rahkshi doesn't have a chemistry lab. Quote Embers - A Bionicle Saga - Chapters/Review Class Is Out - A Farewell To Corpus Rahkshi - Chapters/Review BZPRPG Characters - Minnorak, Kain, T'harrak, Savis, Vazaria, Lash BZPRPG Mercenary Group - The Outsiders - Description - History - Base Ghosts Of Bara Magna - Ash Tribe - Precipere - Kehla, Somok, Skrall, Gayle, Avinus, Zha'ar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Khromatose Posted May 1, 2015 Share Posted May 1, 2015 (edited) In his bio it states there that he gets everything from the Cauldron and uses his vast knowledge from the library to make the items. I also mentioned that he's been in Corpus Rahkshi for a while, hence giving him the time to amass enough knowledge and items. That also means that as of this time he has little access to the Cauldron since the Matoran are fighting back. Edited May 1, 2015 by ArcticFreeze17 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dane-gerous Posted May 1, 2015 Share Posted May 1, 2015 I don't think they'll mind tbh, seeing as they are currently being burned alive by Torch and Shock. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sassy Dalmation Posted May 1, 2015 Share Posted May 1, 2015 If the "invasion" of the matoran does not start war, the burnt village will. This may be interesting. Also, yea, the energy does come from Shock. Quote Corpus Rahkshi: Shock, Mortsia, Draco, Dahl, and Carraig RPG score card:Bionifight Infinite Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sergei Rahkmaninoff Posted May 1, 2015 Share Posted May 1, 2015 Wow. We now have three level fives. Plus Shark's a level three, so that's cool for me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The UltimoScorp Posted May 1, 2015 Share Posted May 1, 2015 Level five, here we come. Quote BZPRPG Profiles The Unofficial Guide to TBRPG Combat! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silo Posted May 1, 2015 Share Posted May 1, 2015 Forever at level 2 ;____; 1 Quote . Kathok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kovika: Visorak Lord Posted May 1, 2015 Share Posted May 1, 2015 (edited) Forever at level 2 ;____;I'm with you buddy.. EDIT: Just read the posts. Yay! Level 3! Edited May 1, 2015 by Kovika Quote "In this new- Wait, why am I being quoted?!"-Kovika, Toa of Ice, Bread Enthusiast, and Ko-Metru Scholar. [flash=250,100]http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/sprxtrerme/BANNERS/thornax.swf Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sergei Rahkmaninoff Posted May 1, 2015 Share Posted May 1, 2015 Forever at level 2 ;____;I'm with you buddy.. What do you mean? Everyone on Visorak who survived leveled up, and that includes Sidonas. You've got a Level 3. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Some Random Phrase Posted May 1, 2015 Share Posted May 1, 2015 Wait, does that mean Fog 's stuck forever? Or is there anyway I can finish up the Venom Flier fight fast enough to get to teh Crawler? Quote Kopaka, the coolest(Pun intended) Ko-Toa ever: "If the fight had turned, Exann might be the one on the floor with Antidermis spurting out of him. This is how battle is. This is how life is." -Mar'jik, Corpus Rahkshi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Click Posted May 1, 2015 Share Posted May 1, 2015 You can just assume he made it into the Crawler with the rescue team. I didn't realize he was still out there. Quote ~ Corpus Rahkshi: Fang | Hoto | Tube | Tear | Canvas | Garrotte | Reda BZPRPG: Azusai | Mitsuri The Scarabax Library | Flickr | Deviantart Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Some Random Phrase Posted May 1, 2015 Share Posted May 1, 2015 Alright. Seeing as I don't want to be unrealistic and say Fog escaped unscathed, would it make sense to say that he escaped the Flyer with a sprained ankle and lost his dirk? Quote Kopaka, the coolest(Pun intended) Ko-Toa ever: "If the fight had turned, Exann might be the one on the floor with Antidermis spurting out of him. This is how battle is. This is how life is." -Mar'jik, Corpus Rahkshi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tea-rex Posted May 1, 2015 Share Posted May 1, 2015 Forever at level 2 ;____;Then again, I never post, but that's not my fault, it's the fault that you people are always in an interaction with each-other. Quote BZPRPG profiles / Corpus Rahkshi Profiles / Matoran un Panzar profiles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The UltimoScorp Posted May 1, 2015 Share Posted May 1, 2015 Poly is open for interaction right now in the Gym. And be on the look out for a new character from me sometime soon. Quote BZPRPG Profiles The Unofficial Guide to TBRPG Combat! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kovika: Visorak Lord Posted May 1, 2015 Share Posted May 1, 2015 Going to be uploading a new character profile in a few hours. Quote "In this new- Wait, why am I being quoted?!"-Kovika, Toa of Ice, Bread Enthusiast, and Ko-Metru Scholar. [flash=250,100]http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/sprxtrerme/BANNERS/thornax.swf Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghidora131 Posted May 1, 2015 Share Posted May 1, 2015 *shivers* what have I started? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kovika: Visorak Lord Posted May 1, 2015 Share Posted May 1, 2015 What do you mean? Quote "In this new- Wait, why am I being quoted?!"-Kovika, Toa of Ice, Bread Enthusiast, and Ko-Metru Scholar. [flash=250,100]http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/sprxtrerme/BANNERS/thornax.swf Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghidora131 Posted May 1, 2015 Share Posted May 1, 2015 *gets new character approved* *two more people promise new characters coming* *hides under bed, expects avalanche* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kovika: Visorak Lord Posted May 1, 2015 Share Posted May 1, 2015 Ghidora, I've actually been planning this for a while. I was thinking about a chemist/alchemist character back when Sidonas almost got killed by Shark, but Arctic beat me to it. So I'll be posting a brute-with-a-sledgehammer-styled Rahk in a few hours, but right now I have a play to attend, so I will be posting when I am at a computer, as I am on a phone right at this moment. Quote "In this new- Wait, why am I being quoted?!"-Kovika, Toa of Ice, Bread Enthusiast, and Ko-Metru Scholar. [flash=250,100]http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/sprxtrerme/BANNERS/thornax.swf Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nato G Posted May 1, 2015 Share Posted May 1, 2015 Hm.... so I only have one character now who hasn't levelled up. Poor Illusive.... Quote Embers - A Bionicle Saga - Chapters/Review Class Is Out - A Farewell To Corpus Rahkshi - Chapters/Review BZPRPG Characters - Minnorak, Kain, T'harrak, Savis, Vazaria, Lash BZPRPG Mercenary Group - The Outsiders - Description - History - Base Ghosts Of Bara Magna - Ash Tribe - Precipere - Kehla, Somok, Skrall, Gayle, Avinus, Zha'ar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sergei Rahkmaninoff Posted May 1, 2015 Share Posted May 1, 2015 (edited) It's better for you than everyone else who only has one character who has levelled up, or even none. Edited May 1, 2015 by Sergei Rahkmaninoff Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghidora131 Posted May 1, 2015 Share Posted May 1, 2015 *hint hint Locus* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Khromatose Posted May 1, 2015 Share Posted May 1, 2015 And even worse when you decided to let go of your characters. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nato G Posted May 1, 2015 Share Posted May 1, 2015 So I now have a Level 5, a deceased Level 4, two Level 3's and two Level 2's, one of whom is dead. Quote Embers - A Bionicle Saga - Chapters/Review Class Is Out - A Farewell To Corpus Rahkshi - Chapters/Review BZPRPG Characters - Minnorak, Kain, T'harrak, Savis, Vazaria, Lash BZPRPG Mercenary Group - The Outsiders - Description - History - Base Ghosts Of Bara Magna - Ash Tribe - Precipere - Kehla, Somok, Skrall, Gayle, Avinus, Zha'ar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghidora131 Posted May 1, 2015 Share Posted May 1, 2015 See? yours have leveled up 7 times. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Timageness Posted May 1, 2015 Share Posted May 1, 2015 Forever at level 2 ;____;Don't feel bad.You know who's also still at Level 2? Rail and Venom.Do they particularly care? No.In all honesty, I've actually been thinking of pitting them against higher level opponents, just to see how well they'd do. Any takers? Quote Epics: Hero Factory: ContagionRPG Characters:BZPRPG CharactersRPG History:The Asylum, Bionifight Infinite, Year 60,000, Matoran und Panzer, HF RPG 2.0, Wasteland, Corpus Rahkshi, SkyriseGM Résumé:Matoran und Panzer (Formerly Appointed Co-GM), Corpus Rahkshi (Former Substitute Co-GM) Feel free to shoot a PM my way if you're waiting for me to respond to something and I've been taking a while to do so. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghidora131 Posted May 1, 2015 Share Posted May 1, 2015 None here. Although a spar with Doubt would be interesting... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sergei Rahkmaninoff Posted May 1, 2015 Share Posted May 1, 2015 I just ran some brief calculations. On average Nato's living characters are level 3.25, with Tirigath and Scorp actually beating him at 3.5 (though if Scorp makes a new character he drops down to a 3). Click's average is 3, mine 2.5. And of course, Ultron reigns supreme with Palma at level 7. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghidora131 Posted May 1, 2015 Share Posted May 1, 2015 Hm, let's see... Mine are at 0.* *scientific discovery Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sergei Rahkmaninoff Posted May 1, 2015 Share Posted May 1, 2015 Not very good science. Yours would be at 2: Vaalku is level 2, plus Doubt is level 2, divided by 2 characters = 2. (I was calculating average level, not average number of level ups, but the misunderstanding is understandable.) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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