Ziko Posted December 11, 2011 Share Posted December 11, 2011 (edited) This is the voting for the "People's Choice" winner of Short Stories Contest #8: Title Twisters.The polling will run until December 17 at 11:59 P.M. EST. The top three will be the voted winners of the contest, and they will be awarded prizes along with the judged winners.-----------Before you vote, make sure you read all of the entries.This isn't a popularity contest; it is a quality contest. You have enough time to read all of these entries so you can make an informed vote.1. Dreams of Darkness2. All That Glitters3. All Our Sins Remembered4. Ignition5. Divided We Fall6. To Trap a Tahnok Edited December 11, 2011 by Ziko Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted December 11, 2011 Share Posted December 11, 2011 In case anyone's interested how these entries got here: The top three entries voted by the judges were the winners (and will be announced at the end of this poll). The next five with the highest amount of votes were chosen to put in this poll (so the same story could not win both Judge's and People's Choice) -- however, the 5th and 6th highest entries were tied, so we decided to put them both in.Anyway, good luck to all the finalists! "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snoopy82 Posted December 11, 2011 Share Posted December 11, 2011 Ignition--a wonderful story that fully deserves to win. I read a number of others beside these 5 and I believe it is one of the best by far. THE BZ-METRU STORY/THE FEAST/SNOOPY82'S BLOG/EPICS RULES/SS RULES/COMEDY RULES Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thunder on the Mountain Posted December 11, 2011 Share Posted December 11, 2011 So these aren't actually entries 1-6, these are 4-9, yes?Anyway, nulling seemed like the way to go for this, because I couldn't decide between 2, 3, and 4. Good luck to all entries, and great to job to whoever made the judges top three! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legolover-361 Posted December 11, 2011 Share Posted December 11, 2011 I have a question -- are the entries in the poll listed in order of ranking, or have they been randomized?At the risk of seeming vain, I'm voting for my own entry (despite a few typos I missed; may I ask for permission to correct them?). (( BZPRPG profiles: Kynaera, Nova )) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ziko Posted December 11, 2011 Author Share Posted December 11, 2011 I have a question -- are the entries in the poll listed in order of ranking, or have they been randomized?The order was randomized. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
55555 Posted December 11, 2011 Share Posted December 11, 2011 So these aren't actually entries 1-6, these are 4-9, yes?Exactly. It seemed the best way of our not-very-many not-very-good options. These entries have to go through an additional elimination round, so that will make them more deserving of their slots alongside the judged best.(despite a few typos I missed; may I ask for permission to correct them?).You can PM Velox, but I don't think further edits will be allowed.- 55555 Fives' Kanohi Shop BuildLikeABoss.Com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darthbrandon Posted December 11, 2011 Share Posted December 11, 2011 Just Curious, how long does the Poll last? I'm BACK!!!!!!!!PM me if you want your comics or movie's reviewed by a guy who loves Bum Reviews!P.S. I am not Doug Walker, nor do I claim to be. Dark709 Fanmovie CHECK OUT DARK709's COMICS AND MOVIES!Darthbrandon14's "ESCAPE FROM DARKNESS", coming soonIF YOU WANT TO GUEST STAR, PM ME ASAP! GIVE ME A "RAZOR" SPRITESHEET! DON'T POST IN MY COMICS! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Erebus Posted December 11, 2011 Share Posted December 11, 2011 Just Curious, how long does the Poll last?The polling will run until December 17 at 11:59 P.M. EST. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darthbrandon Posted December 11, 2011 Share Posted December 11, 2011 Just Curious, how long does the Poll last?The polling will run until December 17 at 11:59 P.M. EST.Missed that, thanks I'm BACK!!!!!!!!PM me if you want your comics or movie's reviewed by a guy who loves Bum Reviews!P.S. I am not Doug Walker, nor do I claim to be. Dark709 Fanmovie CHECK OUT DARK709's COMICS AND MOVIES!Darthbrandon14's "ESCAPE FROM DARKNESS", coming soonIF YOU WANT TO GUEST STAR, PM ME ASAP! GIVE ME A "RAZOR" SPRITESHEET! DON'T POST IN MY COMICS! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peach 00 Posted December 11, 2011 Share Posted December 11, 2011 Just out of curiosity, what happened to the rest of the entries? Not chosen for either the Judge's choices or the People's Choice poll? I'm not sure if this would be allowed in the other topic instead, but just a question. On the day the wall came down / They threw the locks onto the ground And with glasses high / We raised a cry / For freedom had arrived On the day the wall came down / The ship of fools had finally run aground Promises lit up the night / Like paper doves in flight I dreamed you had left my side / No warmth, not even pride remained And even though you needed me / It was clear that I could not do a thing for you Now life devalues day by day / As friends and neighbors turn away And there's a change that even with regret / Cannot be undone Now frontiers shift like desert sands / While nations wash their bloodied hands Of loyalty, of history / In shades of grey I woke to the sound of drums / The music played, the morning sun streamed in I turned and I looked at you / And all but the bitter residues slipped away slipped away... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
55555 Posted December 11, 2011 Share Posted December 11, 2011 Just out of curiosity, what happened to the rest of the entries? Not chosen for either the Judge's choices or the People's Choice poll? I'm not sure if this would be allowed in the other topic instead, but just a question.From the group of entries that you're talking about, 33 entries, there will be five or so Honorable Mentions, but beyond that, alas, they won't get any official recognition. Hopefully every story got at least one decent review, and if not the writer can post it to the SS Critics Club.- 55555 Fives' Kanohi Shop BuildLikeABoss.Com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaleidoscope Tekulo Posted December 12, 2011 Share Posted December 12, 2011 Wow, this was really fast. O.oI recognize three of these entries that I've already read; I'll be sure to read the other three before I cast my vote. Though, I'm a little disappointed that I'm not seeing a few other stories up here... I hope they made it into the top three (or an honorable mention at least).Good luck everyone, and an early congrats to the three winners (Which is kinda moot because we have no clue who they are, so they can't be congratulated, but you know. XD)! ^^ Executive Vice President of Tomato Throwing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xccj Posted December 12, 2011 Share Posted December 12, 2011 Of these, my favorites are "Ignition" and "To Trap a Tahnok" and I ended up voting for the latter. :)Good luck all! My BZPower Stories Dark Core--Kulagi's Kanoka--A Shadow's Contrivance--Mystery on Keli-Nui--BZ-Koro: To Bring Back Bionicle Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Creep Of The Deep Posted December 12, 2011 Share Posted December 12, 2011 >sees my story isn't there;A;Tied between 2 and 6, so I nulled.Good luck! Do not trust corrupted memories. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sumiki Posted December 12, 2011 Share Posted December 12, 2011 (edited) I rather unashamedly voted for my own entry, "All Our Sins Remembered", but I'm just glad to have gotten this far along in my first SS contest.My second choice was difficult, but I'm rather partial to "All That Glitters" and probably would have voted for it had I not made it into the poll. They're all great entries, though, by some talented writers!Good luck to all who entered, and may the best writer win! Edited December 12, 2011 by Sumiki avatar by Lady Kopaka Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Click Posted December 13, 2011 Share Posted December 13, 2011 Well, I hope I got 1-3 if that's 4-9 . I voted for Ignition, I was thoroughly impressed with all the inner conflict and the story. It was a hard choice between that, Dreams of Darkness, and Divided We Fall. They were all great, but I don't like nulling. I can't wait to see the end results! ~ Corpus Rahkshi: Fang | Hoto | Tube | Tear | Canvas | Garrotte | Reda BZPRPG: Azusai | Mitsuri The Scarabax Library | Flickr | Deviantart Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TNTOS Posted December 13, 2011 Share Posted December 13, 2011 Vote for "Dreams of Darkness," although all of them were excellent stories.-TNTOS- "It is not the critic who counts; not the man who points out how the strong man stumbles, or where the doer of deeds could have done them better. The credit belongs to the man who is actually in the arena, whose face is marred by dust and sweat and blood; who strives valiantly; who errs, who comes short again and again, because there is no effort without error and shortcoming; but who does actually strive to do the deeds; who knows great enthusiasms, the great devotions; who spends himself in a worthy cause; who at the best knows in the end the triumph of high achievement, and who at the worst, if he fails, at least fails while daring greatly, so that his place shall never be with those cold and timid souls who neither know victory nor defeat." - Theodore RooseveltA Writerly BlogThe Tasty Library of Sugary Goodness(My Little BIONICLE: Friendship is Explosive Completed 01/05/14){The Shika Trilogy Omnibus Completed 03/31/14) (Review Topic)(In the End Completed 09/01/14) (Review Topic)The Biological Chronicle: (2001) (2002) (2003) (2004) (2005) (2006) (2007) (2008) (2009) (2010) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grant-Sud Posted December 14, 2011 Share Posted December 14, 2011 I too, have voted for myself. =3 However, I'd like to say Dreams of Darkness, Ignition, and All Our Sins Remembered were amazing entries, well all of them were great, but those were my personal favorites. The Island with a Lot of CavesCurly Brace | Sue | King | Polar Star | Outer Wall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mel Posted December 14, 2011 Share Posted December 14, 2011 A hard choice, but I felt Ignition was the best-written. There's a dozen selves inside you, trying to be the one to run the dials [BZPRPG Profiles] Hatchi - Talli - Ranok - Lucira - Ferellis - Morie - Fanai - Akiyo - Yukie - Shuuan - Ilykaed - Pradhai - Ipsudir And some aren't even on your side. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thunder on the Mountain Posted December 15, 2011 Share Posted December 15, 2011 (edited) ...clearly my story was better received amongst judges then amongst the members. But amongst entries like Ignition, I can't blame y'all. XD That three way tie up there is intriguing though, I considered going back on my null to select All That Glitters, as I think it's my favorite of those bunch, and you need a tiebreaker. Doesn't really seem fair though, so I'll pass on it. Edited December 15, 2011 by Bite My Shiny Metal Armour Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rarity Posted December 15, 2011 Share Posted December 15, 2011 Voted for LL's.Was torn between his, and All our Sins remembered(entry 3). >Not reading the first greentext story on BZP >2013 Be a cool kid and vote for mighty morphin' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaleidoscope Tekulo Posted December 15, 2011 Share Posted December 15, 2011 Finally read every entry. This is a really good batch of stories and I really enjoyed them all! For me, the contest was between Ignition and Divided We Fall. I ended up voting for Divided We Fall, it was just beautiful and I thought it fit the theme of the contest the best.Really great stories here, and I look forward to seeing the top three (though, I seriously doubt mine could beat these entries. O.o I can't wait to read the winners!) Good luck! Executive Vice President of Tomato Throwing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taipu1 Posted December 15, 2011 Share Posted December 15, 2011 Well my story isn't there, I suppose there's always the possibility it was one of the 3 right at the top. Bring on results day. - Taipu1.HighFly MatoranShowdownBZPRPG ProfilesHave you seen my Blog? I understand if you haven't Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aderia Posted December 15, 2011 Share Posted December 15, 2011 Divided We Fall, ftw! I just love Grant's writing style. (disclaimer: none of this banner art is original, I just smooshed it together in gimp. Torchic, Matau) Those pesky firespitters... Library | The Sculptors and the Smelters | The Ternion | Review Topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted December 16, 2011 Share Posted December 16, 2011 Divided We Fall, ftw! I just love Grant's writing style.This^. Althought the other entries were well done too, Divided We Fall I just feel is better.-ibrow JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
atvan Posted December 16, 2011 Share Posted December 16, 2011 Ignition. It stood way out.Divided we fall is too repeated of a story to me. Think Predator vs. Alien.All that Glitters was also nice, but the cop-drama-yness put it back a bit. atvan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Excelsior Posted December 16, 2011 Share Posted December 16, 2011 While I liked things about all of them, I went with To Trap A Tahnok. Here's my (somewhat subjective) reasoning:Dreams of Darkness: Quite well-written, but too dark for my taste. I don't think I like horror. Also, I thought the description of the body was a bit too grisly. There's also some continuity troubles (like, the Metru could never have possibly gone to Karzahni, and I don't think he can shapeshift), but I don't really mind things like that. It's poetic license.All That Glitters: Nothing was resolved. What was Vitram doing? What role did the Dark Hunters actually play in all this? Who is the murderer? We never really find out. I understand that's the writer's goal; I just don't like it. And I didn't like Vitram dying. I don't think he deserved it...All Our Sins Remembered: I didn't really understand her backstory at all, but it's a good story. I liked it; I just preferred Tahnok.Ignition: Well-written, again. I liked how the characters were portrayed, especially Dume as the politician/dictator. But the ending spoiled it for me. Nuparu shouldn't have turned it on. I think it would have been better if he had tried to stop Dume and failed.To Trap A Tahnok was my favorite. I liked seeing Matoran win their own battle, I liked the portrayal of Kopaka, which I thought was fairly accurate, and I liked the writing. The grammar/spelling was mostly fine (except for a few typos and jumbled sentences near the beginning) and the writing and imagery were pretty good. So it got my vote.May the best story win!-Romanadvoratrelundar My writings: The Toa Ekara - Visions A short story. Ga-Koro Mobs My entry for the LSO Comedies Contest. Team Extempore's entry for the LSO Epics Contest Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cederak Posted December 17, 2011 Share Posted December 17, 2011 For a man who seldom belts out a short story, I'm actually surprised I made it to the public top 5/6. A funny aside here at the moment: The number of votes for each story is fairly analogous to each story's length. Anyway, good luck to the other finalists. Enjoy your "eternal glory" winners. =)-Ced Cederak's Library l Blog: Fair Enough Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Windrider- Posted December 17, 2011 Share Posted December 17, 2011 For me, it came down to "All That Glitters" and "Ignition." "Ignition" is a very well written rondo, but something about "All That Glitters" keeps drawing my mind back to it.atvan mentioned the "cop-drama-yness" and I can see that; I can see how it could come off as contrived. For me, though, it made for a very fun read whose pace was not slowed by excessive detail and description. That is not to say it is not well written; it is, but it is a simpler style, one that fits well.And yes, I quite enjoyed the twist on the title. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa of Dancing Posted December 17, 2011 Share Posted December 17, 2011 (edited) Very difficult choice between Dreams of Darkness and Ignition. However, the horror story won in the end. So I voted for it. Not too disappointed to see Ignition in first, though. Edited December 17, 2011 by Toa of Dancing This is a signature that describes me as a person. Lazy, dry, and overall just a procra... *insert placeholder signature here* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fishers64 Posted December 18, 2011 Share Posted December 18, 2011 I voted for "To Trap a Tahnok". I liked Kopaka's insight, and it was the least depressing of the bunch. Hero Factory RPG | Bionicle Mafia XXIX: Storyline & Theories Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peach 00 Posted December 18, 2011 Share Posted December 18, 2011 Voted for 'Divided We Fall'. On the day the wall came down / They threw the locks onto the ground And with glasses high / We raised a cry / For freedom had arrived On the day the wall came down / The ship of fools had finally run aground Promises lit up the night / Like paper doves in flight I dreamed you had left my side / No warmth, not even pride remained And even though you needed me / It was clear that I could not do a thing for you Now life devalues day by day / As friends and neighbors turn away And there's a change that even with regret / Cannot be undone Now frontiers shift like desert sands / While nations wash their bloodied hands Of loyalty, of history / In shades of grey I woke to the sound of drums / The music played, the morning sun streamed in I turned and I looked at you / And all but the bitter residues slipped away slipped away... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
55555 Posted December 18, 2011 Share Posted December 18, 2011 Alright ladies & gents, there's no one online who has the power to close the poll at the moment, but the official polling period is over. Votes added after this post ARE NOT VALID, and willl not effect the final scoring.The winners topic will be posted tomorrow, I promise.Until then,- 55555 Fives' Kanohi Shop BuildLikeABoss.Com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ziko Posted December 18, 2011 Author Share Posted December 18, 2011 (edited) Well, it's time to close this. We'll see you tomorrow in the results topic.Slight topic closure delay due to needing to use a phone. Edited December 18, 2011 by Ziko Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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