Nato G Posted May 26, 2015 Share Posted May 26, 2015 Where is the Cauldron, anyway? The Cauldron After running through Phantom-on-the-Water the River Eidolon ends at a series of steep cliffs known as Blacksmith’s Bluffs. Where the course of the river stays truest it has managed to wear these cliffs down into a sandy beach the Ghosts use as a harbour for shipping. But the river splits off into a delta of many little streams and tributaries, most of which aren’t strong enough to erode the cliffs down and instead wind up spilling over the edge as a number of waterfalls. And the largest and most powerful of these falls has wound up carving away at the base of the cliffs, where the hammering of waves already weakened it. The combined might of all that water has opened up a fairly sizeable cave that, due to the turbulent curtain of spray that conceals it, has become referred to by the Ghosts as the Cauldron. They use it for smuggling as, so far at least, the Brotherhood is unaware of its presence. The Rahkshi students, on the other hand, know full well it exists and have adopted it for a similar purpose; smuggling and storing items otherwise considered contraband, be they specialised weaponry or just food nicer than the slop served in the Refectory. Quote Embers - A Bionicle Saga - Chapters/Review Class Is Out - A Farewell To Corpus Rahkshi - Chapters/Review BZPRPG Characters - Minnorak, Kain, T'harrak, Savis, Vazaria, Lash BZPRPG Mercenary Group - The Outsiders - Description - History - Base Ghosts Of Bara Magna - Ash Tribe - Precipere - Kehla, Somok, Skrall, Gayle, Avinus, Zha'ar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kovika: Visorak Lord Posted May 26, 2015 Share Posted May 26, 2015 Karz. I just edited the Sidonas post to where he is escaping with Shield.On a phone so I don't get updates when someone posts. Should I edit or should Locus? Quote "In this new- Wait, why am I being quoted?!"-Kovika, Toa of Ice, Bread Enthusiast, and Ko-Metru Scholar. [flash=250,100]http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/sprxtrerme/BANNERS/thornax.swf Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Quite Dead Posted May 26, 2015 Share Posted May 26, 2015 (edited) You could not autohit grab Shield, that'd be a good start. Don't edit your post, that wasn't my suggestion. I just suggested you look for a way out rather than get Sidonas into another unwinnable situation. Edited May 26, 2015 by Tiragath Quote ...but close to it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nato G Posted May 26, 2015 Share Posted May 26, 2015 General courtesy is that you don't go editing posts after people have already replied to them. Ghidora did that to me once, and I spent half a day wondering why he hadn't replied to Exxan before realising he'd edited his post to have Vaalku go off and interact with someone else entirely. 3 Quote Embers - A Bionicle Saga - Chapters/Review Class Is Out - A Farewell To Corpus Rahkshi - Chapters/Review BZPRPG Characters - Minnorak, Kain, T'harrak, Savis, Vazaria, Lash BZPRPG Mercenary Group - The Outsiders - Description - History - Base Ghosts Of Bara Magna - Ash Tribe - Precipere - Kehla, Somok, Skrall, Gayle, Avinus, Zha'ar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kovika: Visorak Lord Posted May 26, 2015 Share Posted May 26, 2015 (edited) Sorry. Mobile format for BZP does not update me when someone posts. I'll edit. EDIT: Edited. Hope that works. If so then I'll put up the next Sidonas post. Edited May 26, 2015 by Kovika Quote "In this new- Wait, why am I being quoted?!"-Kovika, Toa of Ice, Bread Enthusiast, and Ko-Metru Scholar. [flash=250,100]http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/sprxtrerme/BANNERS/thornax.swf Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nato G Posted May 26, 2015 Share Posted May 26, 2015 Yes, go ahead. Quote Embers - A Bionicle Saga - Chapters/Review Class Is Out - A Farewell To Corpus Rahkshi - Chapters/Review BZPRPG Characters - Minnorak, Kain, T'harrak, Savis, Vazaria, Lash BZPRPG Mercenary Group - The Outsiders - Description - History - Base Ghosts Of Bara Magna - Ash Tribe - Precipere - Kehla, Somok, Skrall, Gayle, Avinus, Zha'ar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kovika: Visorak Lord Posted May 26, 2015 Share Posted May 26, 2015 Grazie. Quote "In this new- Wait, why am I being quoted?!"-Kovika, Toa of Ice, Bread Enthusiast, and Ko-Metru Scholar. [flash=250,100]http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/sprxtrerme/BANNERS/thornax.swf Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Timageness Posted May 26, 2015 Share Posted May 26, 2015 General courtesy is that you don't go editing posts after people have already replied to them. Ghidora did that to me once, and I spent half a day wondering why he hadn't replied to Exxan before realising he'd edited his post to have Vaalku go off and interact with someone else entirely. I'll freely admit to doing this, but only if I have an issue with what I previously posted (mostly due to spelling/grammatical errors, or if I think I can just write something better than it had been previously written.) What my characters do always stays the same, though, so hopefully those I interact with don't find it too annoying. Quote Epics: Hero Factory: ContagionRPG Characters:BZPRPG CharactersRPG History:The Asylum, Bionifight Infinite, Year 60,000, Matoran und Panzer, HF RPG 2.0, Wasteland, Corpus Rahkshi, SkyriseGM Résumé:Matoran und Panzer (Formerly Appointed Co-GM), Corpus Rahkshi (Former Substitute Co-GM) Feel free to shoot a PM my way if you're waiting for me to respond to something and I've been taking a while to do so. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyrd Bid Ful Araed Posted May 26, 2015 Author Share Posted May 26, 2015 Less "picky" and more "confused as to why a weapon that had agreed-upon properties now work completely differently"Ok. I think it's safe to say that we are both in that situation. I'll make it easy and change the rifle to a regular bullet based weapon.Name: Taltrun Variation: Heat Vision Level: 2 Gender: Male Gear: Fully-automatic rifle(is clip fed), survival knife, large bayonete Appearance: He looks like a yellow rahkshi of fear, with bulky shoulder armour. He has an armor decal on his right-arm shoulder armor that looks like Karzakie's mask, and a tattoo on his lower right arm that looks like a hand grenade. Personality: He's the brutal type, that feels "what a gun cant fix, a fist can". He is also very explorative, wondering off in his free time. Bio: Taltrun (Knick-named brass knuckle) was created 1 year ago by an unknown makuta. Apparently he was "too brutal" for is makuta's purposes, and was abandoned. Taltrun learned to survive on his own, and eventualy started to randomly walk into villages and cause destruction (The wors he ever did was shoot up a matoran village). He was later captured and shipped to Corpus Rahkshi.Will this work? I took out all the confusion by making it a regular old gun Yeah, problem with that is that I don't really think real world guns fit into Bionicle, they tend to rely on the bizarre energies that exist in their world. The closest they ever got was a firework revolver and that seems more like a flintlock pistol than any modern weaponry. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Granberia Doragoon Posted May 26, 2015 Share Posted May 26, 2015 (edited) Less "picky" and more "confused as to why a weapon that had agreed-upon properties now work completely differently" Ok. I think it's safe to say that we are both in that situation. I'll make it easy and change the rifle to a regular bullet based weapon. Name: Taltrun Variation: Heat Vision Level: 2 Gender: Male Gear: Fully-automatic rifle(is clip fed), survival knife, large bayonete Appearance: He looks like a yellow rahkshi of fear, with bulky shoulder armour. He has an armor decal on his right-arm shoulder armor that looks like Karzakie's mask, and a tattoo on his lower right arm that looks like a hand grenade. Personality: He's the brutal type, that feels "what a gun cant fix, a fist can". He is also very explorative, wondering off in his free time. Bio: Taltrun (Knick-named brass knuckle) was created 1 year ago by an unknown makuta. Apparently he was "too brutal" for is makuta's purposes, and was abandoned. Taltrun learned to survive on his own, and eventualy started to randomly walk into villages and cause destruction (The wors he ever did was shoot up a matoran village). He was later captured and shipped to Corpus Rahkshi. Will this work? I took out all the confusion by making it a regular old gun Yeah, problem with that is that I don't really think real world guns fit into Bionicle, they tend to rely on the bizarre energies that exist in their world. The closest they ever got was a firework revolver and that seems more like a flintlock pistol than any modern weaponry. Ok, how about I give him a sword |: P Name: Taltrun Variation: Heat Vision Level: 2 Gender: Male Gear: A long sword, survival knife Appearance: He looks like a yellow rahkshi of fear, with bulky shoulder armour. He has an armor decal on his right-arm shoulder armor that looks like Karzahni's mask, and a tattoo on his lower right arm that looks like a hand grenade. Personality: He's the brutal type, that feels "what a gun cant fix, a fist can". He is also very explorative, wondering off in his free time. Bio: Taltrun (Knick-named brass knuckle) was created 1 year ago by an unknown makuta. Apparently he was "too brutal" for is makuta's purposes, and was abandoned. Taltrun learned to survive on his own, and eventualy started to randomly walk into villages and cause destruction (The wors he ever did was shoot up a matoran village). He was later captured and shipped to Corpus Rahkshi. Dere. Now he has a sword Edited May 27, 2015 by MCGPY Quote The Duke is AWESOME!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tea-rex Posted May 26, 2015 Share Posted May 26, 2015 (edited) Just as a pointer, I am now in France,so you can bunny my characters if need be. (de is on the rock, Siren is trying to pick up the matoran by the scruff of its neck).However, if you are going to bunny them, do try to bunny them how they would act, not like they're emotionless robots. Edited May 26, 2015 by Tea-rex Quote BZPRPG profiles / Corpus Rahkshi Profiles / Matoran un Panzar profiles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silo Posted May 26, 2015 Share Posted May 26, 2015 I thought Siren was supposed to be an emotionless robot... 1 Quote . Kathok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghidora131 Posted May 26, 2015 Share Posted May 26, 2015 #SilIsRightForOnce Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nato G Posted May 26, 2015 Share Posted May 26, 2015 Good luck getting any useful information from the Matoran - he never saw who kidnapped him. None of them did. Quote Embers - A Bionicle Saga - Chapters/Review Class Is Out - A Farewell To Corpus Rahkshi - Chapters/Review BZPRPG Characters - Minnorak, Kain, T'harrak, Savis, Vazaria, Lash BZPRPG Mercenary Group - The Outsiders - Description - History - Base Ghosts Of Bara Magna - Ash Tribe - Precipere - Kehla, Somok, Skrall, Gayle, Avinus, Zha'ar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Click Posted May 26, 2015 Share Posted May 26, 2015 Well, just the fact that he was kidnapped and dropped into the school would be useful. And Fang needs to do something before Tridax gets suspicious. Quote ~ Corpus Rahkshi: Fang | Hoto | Tube | Tear | Canvas | Garrotte | Reda BZPRPG: Azusai | Mitsuri The Scarabax Library | Flickr | Deviantart Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FallenAtlas Posted May 27, 2015 Share Posted May 27, 2015 This is getting interesting.. Quote Short Stories: A Chance Meeting | The Destiny of Teridax | End of An Island | A Conversation | Hurt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nato G Posted May 27, 2015 Share Posted May 27, 2015 Every day at Corpus Rahkshi is interesting. Quote Embers - A Bionicle Saga - Chapters/Review Class Is Out - A Farewell To Corpus Rahkshi - Chapters/Review BZPRPG Characters - Minnorak, Kain, T'harrak, Savis, Vazaria, Lash BZPRPG Mercenary Group - The Outsiders - Description - History - Base Ghosts Of Bara Magna - Ash Tribe - Precipere - Kehla, Somok, Skrall, Gayle, Avinus, Zha'ar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sergei Rahkmaninoff Posted May 27, 2015 Share Posted May 27, 2015 Just wait until you're the one fighting for your life. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Klanadack Posted May 27, 2015 Share Posted May 27, 2015 Then, it gets REALLY interesting. Quote Chuck Norik is no match for Bruce Lhikan! If you use correct grammar in your posts (or try hard to), place this in your signature. Join Myst's campaign for correct grammar usage on BZPower! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Sassy Dalmation Posted May 27, 2015 Share Posted May 27, 2015 IC: Burst"I'm gonna regret this, I just know it."Burst thought to himself as he knelt down over Haken's unconscious body. But with everyone's eyes glued to the Matoran, he had to do this now. Fiddling with the seal on Haken's carapace, Burst felt relief as it opened with a tiny "click". Reaching his hand inside of the slimey interior of the shell, it soon came to rest on Haken's equally unconscious Kraata. Upon examination, the worm appeared to be dead, but it's breathing proved that little theory to be untrue. Now came the hard part. Working carefully as not to make any noise, Burst undid the seal on his own carapace, a task that proved to be far easier, as it's battle scars had damaged the lock significantly. Placing Haken inside, Burst felt the worm slide down to the back of the shell. Trembling slightly, Burst rose to his feet. Expecting to see the cruel gaze of Draco or Tridax, Burst instead saw neither. By some miracle, Burst had gone unseen throughout the whole ordeal. Breathing a quick sigh of relief, the Kurahk quickly dissolved back into the crowd, making use of the large groups of Rahkshi entering the Corpus to conceal his escape.OOC: All bunnying approved by Kovika.This seems slightly unfair. Haken was sitting at Draco's feet, so to say he went unnoticed by Draco or Tridax is a bit of a stretch. Quote Corpus Rahkshi: Shock, Mortsia, Draco, Dahl, and Carraig RPG score card:Bionifight Infinite Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nato G Posted May 27, 2015 Share Posted May 27, 2015 So, some people have raised their concerns with my via Skype as to my most recent Matoran post at the Causeway. I've been accused of changing the Matoran's character simply to be frustrating and spiteful, which is not case. Up until this point, the Matoran has desperately been trying to fight his way out of the school and escape to his home - hence why he's been panicky, fleeing, and so on. But now that he's in a position where escape is impossible and he's facing the prospect of imminent death regardless of whether he cooperates of not, he's being defiant. I find it difficult to believe that someone who was ambushed and kidnapped by Rahkshi, witnessed his friends being murdered by Rahkshi, and is now being interrogated by Rahkshi who he believes will kill him anyway, would have any reason to be cooperative. That said, if the GM feels that I have been unrealistic in doing this, I will edit my post, and pass over control of the two surviving Matoran NPCs to him, since I am clearly unfit to continue controlling them. 2 Quote Embers - A Bionicle Saga - Chapters/Review Class Is Out - A Farewell To Corpus Rahkshi - Chapters/Review BZPRPG Characters - Minnorak, Kain, T'harrak, Savis, Vazaria, Lash BZPRPG Mercenary Group - The Outsiders - Description - History - Base Ghosts Of Bara Magna - Ash Tribe - Precipere - Kehla, Somok, Skrall, Gayle, Avinus, Zha'ar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kovika: Visorak Lord Posted May 27, 2015 Share Posted May 27, 2015 Locus, think it'd be ok to have Sido scram out of there? Quote "In this new- Wait, why am I being quoted?!"-Kovika, Toa of Ice, Bread Enthusiast, and Ko-Metru Scholar. [flash=250,100]http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/sprxtrerme/BANNERS/thornax.swf Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nato G Posted May 27, 2015 Share Posted May 27, 2015 Locus, think it'd be ok to have Sido scram out of there? Last I checked Sliver was still standing between him and the exit, so no. Quote Embers - A Bionicle Saga - Chapters/Review Class Is Out - A Farewell To Corpus Rahkshi - Chapters/Review BZPRPG Characters - Minnorak, Kain, T'harrak, Savis, Vazaria, Lash BZPRPG Mercenary Group - The Outsiders - Description - History - Base Ghosts Of Bara Magna - Ash Tribe - Precipere - Kehla, Somok, Skrall, Gayle, Avinus, Zha'ar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kovika: Visorak Lord Posted May 27, 2015 Share Posted May 27, 2015 Alright. Hmm... Guess it's back to fighting me way out. Internet is being shut down temporarily cause' some stuff got hit due to the weather last night. Might post tomorrow. Arrivaderci. Quote "In this new- Wait, why am I being quoted?!"-Kovika, Toa of Ice, Bread Enthusiast, and Ko-Metru Scholar. [flash=250,100]http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/sprxtrerme/BANNERS/thornax.swf Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Klanadack Posted May 27, 2015 Share Posted May 27, 2015 IC: Burst"I'm gonna regret this, I just know it."Burst thought to himself as he knelt down over Haken's unconscious body. But with everyone's eyes glued to the Matoran, he had to do this now. Fiddling with the seal on Haken's carapace, Burst felt relief as it opened with a tiny "click". Reaching his hand inside of the slimey interior of the shell, it soon came to rest on Haken's equally unconscious Kraata. Upon examination, the worm appeared to be dead, but it's breathing proved that little theory to be untrue. Now came the hard part. Working carefully as not to make any noise, Burst undid the seal on his own carapace, a task that proved to be far easier, as it's battle scars had damaged the lock significantly. Placing Haken inside, Burst felt the worm slide down to the back of the shell. Trembling slightly, Burst rose to his feet. Expecting to see the cruel gaze of Draco or Tridax, Burst instead saw neither. By some miracle, Burst had gone unseen throughout the whole ordeal. Breathing a quick sigh of relief, the Kurahk quickly dissolved back into the crowd, making use of the large groups of Rahkshi entering the Corpus to conceal his escape.OOC: All bunnying approved by Kovika.This seems slightly unfair. Haken was sitting at Draco's feet, so to say he went unnoticed by Draco or Tridax is a bit of a stretch.I'll admit that it was a bit of a stretch, though it's feasible that Burst could have gone unseen. With Tridax genuinely concerned about the matoran in the school, it would make sense that he would pay as much attention to the interrogation as possible, to try and form a plan. Also, Burst hasn't actually reached the crowd entering the Corpus yet, so Draco could easily casually look down, notice that Haken's body has shifted, see Burst nervously fleeing the scene, and immediately give chase. Which, knowing Draco, he will probably do as soon as this gets posted. Quote Chuck Norik is no match for Bruce Lhikan! If you use correct grammar in your posts (or try hard to), place this in your signature. Join Myst's campaign for correct grammar usage on BZPower! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghidora131 Posted May 27, 2015 Share Posted May 27, 2015 I have made the fattest Rahk In existence. What about the smallest? Name: Bleach Variation: Vacuum Level: 2 Gender: Male Gear: Bleach carries a small beetle-shaped device fused to the back of his hand, too small to be used in fighting. It has the ability to heal minds when he places that hand on another Rahk's head for even a moment. As said before, sucks in combat. He also has a diary in his dorm. Appearance: Measuring half a Bio tall, Bleach is incredibly light and can throw himself around because of it. He was the usual Vacuum Rahk color until accident (see Bio) which bleached his head, body, and upper limbs white. His eyes are light blue. Personality: Bleach is very easily scared, and seemingly helpless. He likes company, and is good-natured to everybody who doesn't scare him. He often gets nightmares when he sleeps. His intentions are to establish his own communications center to Matoran and heal them when they are troubled, although he has no idea if his device will work on them. (it only works slightly on anything besides Rahkshi) Bio:Bleach was designed to go undercover as a Matoran, but proved too Matoran-like. During a factory accident in his Makuta's laboratory, his body was dumped on by sulfurous materials, staining it permanently white and erasing the nice paint from before. After which, he proved his combat skills and was assigned to corpus. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nato G Posted May 27, 2015 Share Posted May 27, 2015 Half a bio tall? Really? Quote Embers - A Bionicle Saga - Chapters/Review Class Is Out - A Farewell To Corpus Rahkshi - Chapters/Review BZPRPG Characters - Minnorak, Kain, T'harrak, Savis, Vazaria, Lash BZPRPG Mercenary Group - The Outsiders - Description - History - Base Ghosts Of Bara Magna - Ash Tribe - Precipere - Kehla, Somok, Skrall, Gayle, Avinus, Zha'ar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghidora131 Posted May 27, 2015 Share Posted May 27, 2015 If this gets approved, I'd like Sergei to build it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Timageness Posted May 27, 2015 Share Posted May 27, 2015 (edited) Alright. Hmm... Guess it's back to fighting me way out. Internet is being shut down temporarily cause' some stuff got hit due to the weather last night. Might post tomorrow. Arrivaderci.You could always, you know, attempt to convince Liar to help. He is currently just standing around at the moment, watching you guys duke it out.Fair warning, though; I'd bring my A Game to the negotiating tabe. Since Liar's pretty chaotic, there's only about a 33% chance of him doing so, meaning that he'd be just as likely to continue spectating from the sidelines, or even worse; jump in to aid Sliver. Your call. Edited May 27, 2015 by Timageness Quote Epics: Hero Factory: ContagionRPG Characters:BZPRPG CharactersRPG History:The Asylum, Bionifight Infinite, Year 60,000, Matoran und Panzer, HF RPG 2.0, Wasteland, Corpus Rahkshi, SkyriseGM Résumé:Matoran und Panzer (Formerly Appointed Co-GM), Corpus Rahkshi (Former Substitute Co-GM) Feel free to shoot a PM my way if you're waiting for me to respond to something and I've been taking a while to do so. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sassy Dalmation Posted May 27, 2015 Share Posted May 27, 2015 It would have the worst head-to-body ratio ever.... Quote Corpus Rahkshi: Shock, Mortsia, Draco, Dahl, and Carraig RPG score card:Bionifight Infinite Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghidora131 Posted May 27, 2015 Share Posted May 27, 2015 Nonono, Frog will have the worst. But that is yet to come. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sassy Dalmation Posted May 27, 2015 Share Posted May 27, 2015 Call the exterminator then... Quote Corpus Rahkshi: Shock, Mortsia, Draco, Dahl, and Carraig RPG score card:Bionifight Infinite Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dallior Posted May 27, 2015 Share Posted May 27, 2015 OK, I just posted the IC post. The Corp Rahk Student Band has now begun! If you have a Rahk with an instrument, join it. It could be a way to level up and gain in-story relationships. So do it! Quote "Remember when the comics forum had a lot of good stuff? Let's make that a thing again." -Kazi the Matoran Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Naota Takizawa Posted May 27, 2015 Share Posted May 27, 2015 (edited) OK, I just posted the IC post. The Corp Rahk Student Band has now begun! If you have a Rahk with an instrument, join it. It could be a way to level up and gain in-story relationships. So do it!Sounds perfect, I'm joining. Where's Dakilik by the way, I was thinking of having my character find him and ask to join the band. Edited May 27, 2015 by Liuth Quote If you like Pingu & want to support a good project, click here. Also, I've rejoined the BZPRPG & I have a new profile for a new game. Click here to see it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
In Between the Shadows Posted May 27, 2015 Share Posted May 27, 2015 Don't we already have Char and Short (I think) for schools smallest rahkshi? Quote ~Just call me Shadow_Ignited~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Click Posted May 27, 2015 Share Posted May 27, 2015 Char is short for a Rahkshi, but she's not that short. Short is even smaller, but even she isn't half a bio tall. That's less than two feet. Quote ~ Corpus Rahkshi: Fang | Hoto | Tube | Tear | Canvas | Garrotte | Reda BZPRPG: Azusai | Mitsuri The Scarabax Library | Flickr | Deviantart Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
In Between the Shadows Posted May 27, 2015 Share Posted May 27, 2015 Are you serious? How does the kraata fit in there or is it tiny too?! Quote ~Just call me Shadow_Ignited~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nato G Posted May 27, 2015 Share Posted May 27, 2015 I'm wondering the same thing. Half a bio seems a decent size for a Kraata, not an entire Rahkshi. Quote Embers - A Bionicle Saga - Chapters/Review Class Is Out - A Farewell To Corpus Rahkshi - Chapters/Review BZPRPG Characters - Minnorak, Kain, T'harrak, Savis, Vazaria, Lash BZPRPG Mercenary Group - The Outsiders - Description - History - Base Ghosts Of Bara Magna - Ash Tribe - Precipere - Kehla, Somok, Skrall, Gayle, Avinus, Zha'ar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyrd Bid Ful Araed Posted May 27, 2015 Author Share Posted May 27, 2015 For the record, I don't find the Matoran's behaviour objectionable. Just kind of rude Name: Taltrun Variation: Heat Vision Level: 2 Gender: Male Gear: A long sword, survival knife Appearance: He looks like a yellow rahkshi of fear, with bulky shoulder armour. He has an armor decal on his right-arm shoulder armor that looks like Karzakie's mask, and a tattoo on his lower right arm that looks like a hand grenade. Personality: He's the brutal type, that feels "what a gun cant fix, a fist can". He is also very explorative, wondering off in his free time. Bio: Taltrun (Knick-named brass knuckle) was created 1 year ago by an unknown makuta. Apparently he was "too brutal" for is makuta's purposes, and was abandoned. Taltrun learned to survive on his own, and eventualy started to randomly walk into villages and cause destruction (The wors he ever did was shoot up a matoran village). He was later captured and shipped to Corpus Rahkshi.Approved, though there are a few minor changes you may wish to make just for clarity (Karzakie is meant to be Karzahni, I assume?) Name: Bleach Variation: Vacuum Level: 2 Gender: Male Gear: Bleach carries a small beetle-shaped device fused to the back of his hand, too small to be used in fighting. It has the ability to heal minds when he places that hand on another Rahk's head for even a moment. As said before, sucks in combat. He also has a diary in his dorm. Appearance: Measuring half a Bio tall, Bleach is incredibly light and can throw himself around because of it. He was the usual Vacuum Rahk color until accident (see Bio) which bleached his head, body, and upper limbs white. His eyes are light blue. Personality: Bleach is very easily scared, and seemingly helpless. He likes company, and is good-natured to everybody who doesn't scare him. He often gets nightmares when he sleeps. His intentions are to establish his own communications center to Matoran and heal them when they are troubled, although he has no idea if his device will work on them. (it only works slightly on anything besides Rahkshi) Bio:Bleach was designed to go undercover as a Matoran, but proved too Matoran-like. During a factory accident in his Makuta's laboratory, his body was dumped on by sulfurous materials, staining it permanently white and erasing the nice paint from before. After which, he proved his combat skills and was assigned to corpus. Undercover as a Matoran by making him shorter than any Matoran that has ever existed? That doesn't make sense.And you don't explain where or how he got something as seemingly advanced as his healing brain-beetle. Even if it was a gift from his Makuta, why would they give something like that to him? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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